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i was driving back from the city with my friend.  it wasn't quiet raining but drizzling that day.  We were on our way to a birthday party.  All together we were starving and had very little time.  So we decided to entere a BK drive through expecting to get cheap food in very little time. There was a huge line of cars ahead of us.  It almost felt like one of those never ending traffic.  Very little time and starving at the same time made us impatience.  All of a sudden we see the line in front of us disappearing and thats when i realize that we were in a BK drive through.  It doesn't take long to get food from from there mostly because people are already familiar with the menu and by the time you go to the next window your foods ready.