revision

 Saturday evening, driving through traffic with my friend in the city.  It was a rainy day with a cloudy sky.  We were both super hungry.  You can only imagine how it feels to get stuck in the traffic while your stomach is empty.  The windows are closed, barely any noise.  All we can hear is the growling of our stomach consistantly and the more we hear it the more we get hungry.  What we needed to find is a place to eat with fast service_ the quality of the food didn't really matter.  So first we look at a gyro stand, but the line was too big that we got tired of looking at it.  All of a sudden we see a king with a crown on his head standing with a sandwich and soda with a logo on the side saying "BK".  We were not just happy but beyond it.  So we raise the speed limit and drive towards the restaurant like a kid going for a candy or a toy.  So we approach toward the drive through and we can already see the menu.  Not that we needed the menu, because we already knew the menu so well.  Just when we thought everythings going right....BAM!  All the misery tumbles down.  We see a big line of cars ahead of us and a big line right behind us made us feel like we are stuck in the middle of nowhere. Cursing out our luck, in about less then 5 minute we hear next.  And it was already our turn to order food.  By the time we went to the next door the food was ready.  As we drove out digging for food looking at the side mirror at the same time, we see BK walking away from us.  Thats when it hit me that it was a fast food restaurant and so the service was fast saving both of us for the time being.

descriptive writing

i was driving back from the city with my friend.  it wasn't quiet raining but drizzling that day.  We were on our way to a birthday party.  All together we were starving and had very little time.  So we decided to entere a BK drive through expecting to get cheap food in very little time. There was a huge line of cars ahead of us.  It almost felt like one of those never ending traffic.  Very little time and starving at the same time made us impatience.  All of a sudden we see the line in front of us disappearing and thats when i realize that we were in a BK drive through.  It doesn't take long to get food from from there mostly because people are already familiar with the menu and by the time you go to the next window your foods ready.